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Character Designs for the upcoming Heroes Unite: EGO webcomic [link] . These are loosely based on two existing characters, credits as follows:

Blue Beacon created by ~BlueBeacon
Motherboard created by Hero [link]

Second wave: [link]
Third wave: [link]

Media: Pencil, Staedtler pen 0.3, Photoshop
Date: August 2008

----EDIT 08/21/08: Added Beacon's glove----

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:iconamandalafrenais:
Very nice, I like the way the girl is drawn. I like that her costume alters the shape of her breasts, they're drawn with some weight to them. Nice.
However, when her legs are spread like that, there should be more of a gap between her thighs. Her crotch should be more of a 'box' and less of a triangle.

A crotch-related comment: On the man, those two bold, vertical lines for his zipper draw alot of attention to his crotch. ;D Maybe this is intentional? His costume is refreshing, kinda retro.

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:iconbrady-kj:
Hi. I like the Golden Age-ishness of Blue Beacon's pants, boots, and shirt, but the name sounds too darn much like a Green Lantern copy. Is he? Great look though, like I said.
:iconslidestudios:
pretty sweet.

like the tones and highlights on motherboard.

The dude's pants look a little loose in the crotch.
:iconabt-nihil:
Well, I'll try staring at crotches more to gain experience.

Excuse the snappy line, I just got tempted. You're absolutely right. The thing with the girl's crotch probably hint towards my anatomy problems, the guy's crotch had more to do with the fact that this was all drawn pretty quickly (I've got a dozen more characters to design ^^;), and this is just a loose version of my default way to draw male crotches :D

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:iconabt-nihil:
Thanks!

I think the similarity is very much there (he does gain his powers from a blue lamp (!), though I completely ignore that in my story :D); in my version of the character (both in the way I wrote and designed him) I tried to keep the Green-Lantern-ish things to a minimum. There is a redesign by another artist which the creator supplied me with, and although it is very well drawn, it just has Green Lantern written all over it. So this is my attempt to move away from that.

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Remembering Cherigirl...
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:iconabt-nihil:
Thank you! This was all done very quickly, so excuse the crotch please :D

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:iconsnarebang:
Cool! I'll make sure to check it out.

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"In the Ice-age everyone was an Ice-sculptor."
:iconamandalafrenais:
Ahaha, I thought the one-liner was funny if anything. Especially if you were to draw people in a public place as they walked by, eyes fixed on their junk.

And those were just little nit picks. As you can tell, I myself pay attention to crothches. Maybe too much so.

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:iconbrady-kj:
So, what are his powers, and how else is his story GreenLanterny? Are you changing his backstory?

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